ATM FORUM: Technical Committee Working Group                     ATM_Forum/94 

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SOURCE:    Poetry Ad Hoc Working Group 
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TITLE:     Proposed Change to First Line of Poem

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DATE:      Oct 10, 1994

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DISTRIBUTION TO:     ATM Forum Poetry Working Group Members

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ABSTRACT

This contribution suggests a change to the first line of the ATM
Forum Poem for reasons of increased artistic license.

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NOTICE

This contribution has been prepared to assist the ATM Forum. This poem is
offered to the Forum as a basis for discussion and is not a binding proposal
on the participating member companies. The material contained in these verses
is subject to change in rhyme and/or meter after more study. 

Each of the participating member companies specifically reserves the right
to add to, or amend, the stanzas contained herein.

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It is proposed to modify the first line of the poem to read:

"My love is like a red, red jello."

It is believed that such an opening line is more general in form and will allow a group of intensely nerdy engineers more scope for artistic expression.